Very.... dark... didn't think that Voldemort will take his muggle name, Tom Riddle. Nicely written though. I see the style - a number of drabbles written to make a whole story. An open end.
Bellatrix is like a Peter Piper, luring all those kids to be... drunk. Is weird to laugh at this imagery when the kids were killed?
And the *end* was a surprising one, of Severus taking Harry back to "Tom" as he couldn't stand Harry abusing himself and feeling as if he was tearing him and "Tom" apart somehow. So dark *shivers*
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Date: 2007-02-04 06:28 pm (UTC)Bellatrix is like a Peter Piper, luring all those kids to be... drunk. Is weird to laugh at this imagery when the kids were killed?
And the *end* was a surprising one, of Severus taking Harry back to "Tom" as he couldn't stand Harry abusing himself and feeling as if he was tearing him and "Tom" apart somehow. So dark *shivers*